viney
Puppy
[Mo0:2]
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Post by viney on Feb 24, 2010 17:43:46 GMT -5
I LLLUUUUVVVVV IT!!!!!!!!!!! soooo muuuuuuccccchhhhh WRITE MORE IMMEDIATELY, plz!!!!!! lol
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Post by Webtooth on Feb 26, 2010 17:49:31 GMT -5
lolz XD im making moar
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Post by Phoenix on Jun 20, 2011 19:32:37 GMT -5
LOL LOVE IT AWESOME !!!  |
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Post by No1GarDehT on Oct 21, 2012 13:26:28 GMT -5
Its really good! If you added little actions while they are talking in story it gives it a different affect.
EX. "I lost the buck in the forest,"said Jo scratching a circle into the dirt,"but I found a rabbit den on the way back."
See how his scratching gives the effect of his embarassment?Keep on writing!!Ill be reading!!
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Dusk
Canine Warrior
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Post by Dusk on Feb 17, 2013 20:30:11 GMT -5
I love this! Please white more!
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